So, I just realized this Thursday is Thanksgiving and I doubt I'll have time to post anything during my excessive burning of food. Yeah, I'm a horrible cook. I'm surprised I haven't found a way to burn water yet. Awell, give me time and I will.
Anyway, here's a snippet involving Evie, Derek, and a few skulls. Enjoy.
*Now Closed. Thanks for the comments!*
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I love your teasers, but I'm wondering if you main character has feelings for this Derek character? It certainly seems like it. Regardless, this is well done. You do a good job building tension in all your teasers.
Thanks guys! It's called "Snapshot" but I might change the name. It's finished and going through first round of editing. Some other titles I was considering were Good as Dead, Never Say Dead, or Never Kill a Boy on the First Date
the fake skull is a prop that was lying around n boxes of halloween decorations. i thought it'd be a funny weapon for her to threaten him with. glad to know someone else found the skull part interesting!
I'm an aspiring writer and SCBWI member who writes about the strange and mysterious world of amatuer sleuths, PIs, and good ol' occult detectives. I'm also an FC Critique Group Member. You can reach me at: RamblingAsh[at]gmail[dot]com.
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I love your teasers, but I'm wondering if you main character has feelings for this Derek character? It certainly seems like it. Regardless, this is well done. You do a good job building tension in all your teasers.
I like! Do you have a name for your novel yet, and how far are you into it?
Thanks guys! It's called "Snapshot" but I might change the name. It's finished and going through first round of editing. Some other titles I was considering were Good as Dead, Never Say Dead, or Never Kill a Boy on the First Date
Snapshot sounds like a professional title, but I really like "Never Kill a Boy on the First Date." It's definitely memorable and catchy!
girl! you can really write!!
I love the fake skull in the story. . kind-of eerie! Now I want to read the rest!!
thanks : )
the fake skull is a prop that was lying around n boxes of halloween decorations. i thought it'd be a funny weapon for her to threaten him with. glad to know someone else found the skull part interesting!
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