*closes excerpt*
Thanks for the comments! Next time I'll try to post it earlier in the day!
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Ahh, I love the beginning where he's such a hardass on her!
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wish I had hot teacher to drool over in real life!
p.s.--i sent you a message on AW
one of the "to" should be "too" but besides that it's good for a rough draft. i feel for the MC and her dry humor toward the teacher. what was the conversation about? does it have something to do with the murder mentioned in the previous teaser?
Damn. I missed it!
Will you be doing this every thursday?
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