Nov 24, 2009

Now, A Teaser from my Novel

So, I just realized this Thursday is Thanksgiving and I doubt I'll have time to post anything during my excessive burning of food. Yeah, I'm a horrible cook. I'm surprised I haven't found a way to burn water yet. Awell, give me time and I will.

Anyway, here's a snippet involving Evie, Derek, and a few skulls. Enjoy.

*Now Closed. Thanks for the comments!*

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love your teasers, but I'm wondering if you main character has feelings for this Derek character? It certainly seems like it. Regardless, this is well done. You do a good job building tension in all your teasers.

Voidwalker said...

I like! Do you have a name for your novel yet, and how far are you into it?

Ash. Elizabeth said...

Thanks guys! It's called "Snapshot" but I might change the name. It's finished and going through first round of editing. Some other titles I was considering were Good as Dead, Never Say Dead, or Never Kill a Boy on the First Date

Voidwalker said...

Snapshot sounds like a professional title, but I really like "Never Kill a Boy on the First Date." It's definitely memorable and catchy!

Haleyknitz said...

girl! you can really write!!

brizmus said...

I love the fake skull in the story. . kind-of eerie! Now I want to read the rest!!

Ash. Elizabeth said...

thanks : )

the fake skull is a prop that was lying around n boxes of halloween decorations. i thought it'd be a funny weapon for her to threaten him with. glad to know someone else found the skull part interesting!